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Hello watchers!

For those of you reading this story, how are you finding it so far? If my previous tests are any indication we're around the halfway point of the story, at least for detail.

How do you feel about how well your girls are doing, and what's happened to them so far?
And who do you think may win and lose? So far we've had quite a few leaders captured and overtaken.

In the last few days less turns have been added, but each turn is getting longer. At the moment there are girls in 14 of the 19 areas in the game. Lots of different things are happening.

Some readers have also said that after the initial excitement they've slowed down their reading a bit, so I didn't want to post too much for them to digest. What do you think, should I try to post more updates or is the current pace okay?

I've been asked about what the connection to a nation in the world cup means a few times as well. Sorry for not explaining that at the start! Here's how it works:

Each girl has a team (shown in the last journal now). If that team plays, the story will include her in that turn. If she's caught, the captivity will be given some focus. If another girl is caught nearby, or if she overtakes a girl who is caught, it'll be explained from her perspective. This is why it took so long for some girls to debut.

There is a link to performance too. If a girl's team wins, she moves one extra turn's worth and if her team loses she'll be captured for one turn longer. These boosts won't be wasted - if her team wins while she's captured for example, the boost will be saved until after her release. These stored boosts can stack, so if her team loses twice before she is caught, she'll be held for two extra turns!

I think that's all I needed to explain and wanted to ask about. But if there's anything else you want to know about feel free to ask here!

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53bload53 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
hi veroom! it's been a while since you posted any news, how's everything going? :D
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Veroom Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
It has? I've been posting journals and literature deviations quite a bit recently I thought...
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53bload53 Featured By Owner 6 days ago
yeah, I just realised they weren't showing up on me. Oh well, anyways how's everything about the game editing stuff doing?
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Veroom Featured By Owner 5 days ago
If you mean the tickle flash game... on hold for an unknown time, sadly. If I can finish my current project and a couple other flash commitments quickly enough I'll have some time to try something before the next deadline rolls around.
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3DFootFan Featured By Owner May 29, 2014
hey, long time no hear, how's it going?
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Veroom Featured By Owner May 29, 2014
Not bad, haven't really touched the game editing stuff for a couple of months now. Been back to doing art after all =P
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3DFootFan Featured By Owner May 30, 2014
cool. I've been busy myself. Are you into tickling and RP? If so you can check out one of my latest projects
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Veroom Featured By Owner May 30, 2014
The booth stuff? Good concept I guess. Can't say I rp in publicly viewable places much.
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vladen13 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
Guess you got the ' Booby prize ' in faving this piece! And my thanks with it!
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Veroom Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
Ooh? What did I win? =)
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